I want to dance
To twirl and feel the air
Lift silken layers and guide your eager
Hands to my hips…
I want to dance
My fingers across your nape
Twine them into your curls
And tug gently till our eyes meet…
I want to dance
Attendance on your lips
To linger thigh to thigh
In a soft cocoon…
I want to dance
But we are caught
as surely as our hands between us
Or our mingled breaths…
We pull apart
You twirl me away
Chiffon floats like a cloud
I want to dance…
Dee, this was beautiful.
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Thank you, Rob. Sort of a metaphor for my writing lately. Or lack of lol
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When I was reading your post, I was thinking of this song immediately.
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Omg, that is fabulous! I was thinking, wow, Frank and I were on the same wave length and then, boom, not so much, lol.
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Yeah, his love is punk rock, to the song changes drastically. 🙂
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Hahaha. It’s pretty fun tho
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This was beautiful. So happy to see you write again.
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Thank you, Andrew. I’m fairly bursting to write and so glad I got something written!
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Hopefully, the words will continue to flow
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Yes, no excuses. Just write, right?
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Something like that. Or at least do something that may inspire you to write, right?
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Yes, exactly. I should have ended with I NEED to dance, because I get a little crazy without something creative in my life.
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It was fine the way you wrote it
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Mwah!
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xoxo
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It gives me a lovely, dreamy feeling. It’s beautifully written.
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Thanks! Don’t laugh, but I could not get that Ed Sheehan song Perfect out of my head so glad I maybe captured the feeling!
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I would like to get that song out of my head permanently… 🙂 But no… not laughing!
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I can see it being played at all the weddings coming up this year!
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Oh, I’m convinced that’s the only reason he wrote it!!
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I just adore him .thinking out loud, too. I guess he is engaged now
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When he first first appeared, he was alright but now he’s all pop and that’s not for me. My younger kid and her friends like(d) him though… I think he may have fallen out of favor with them… they change what they like daily… lol
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I know,my kids are so embarrassed by me! Meghan Trainor was on Ellen recently and I was do excited
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Now her… I can’t stand… and neither can my daughter… but some of her friends like her. At least they did last time the name came up… who knows how they feel today… lol
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Funny! My 5 yr old grandson is very pop rock like mommy but daddy is introducing hi to Metallica
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Haha! 😀
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Oh yes! Lovely
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Wonderful Dee! So dreamy and romantic 💗
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Thanks, Meg! And I’m needing to get back to writing. I literally get crazed w/o a creative outlet.
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Excellent! Bring on the new ideas!
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Love, love, love this! Dancing can just like that, can’t it? Sort of intoxicating. 😃
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Thank you, Just the feeling I was going for
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You got it. To a tee. 😃
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D!! I love this!! Dance, my friend, and keep dancing (writing)!! ❤
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D, thank you so much for saying that! I knew you would understand 🙂
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I’m happily joining in on the chorus of praise, this was wonderful! I wish I knew something about submitting poetry for publication, I’d push you to do it!
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Christy, thank you so much! I’m so glad you liked it
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Wow – that was lovely! Thanks for sharing! ❤
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Beautiful
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Thank you so much, Miri!
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You’re very welcome.
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The poem is so beautiful. It’s goes perfectly along with the painting above it. It really compliments each other.
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