Adam Mitchum sat in an uncomfortably small, warm room at the Jackson County Jail. Detective Townsend said he’d just be a minute, but it seemed like an hour. He finally reappeared with the promised cup of water.
“Talked to your wife already, Mitchum. Says she was asleep when you left, can’t say for sure what time it was. Thought the garage door opened real early, like 4 a.m.”
Lying bitch, Adam thought. “She’s — mistaken. I made coffee and left the house about six. Anyway, the cameras in the school vestibule will show what time I got there.”
“Nope, they’d been disabled.”
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My theme this year is 100 word fiction. (So no, don’t count this line.) This is a continuation of A is for Apple, which you can read here.
Oho!!! Awesome! I love this… is he being framed or is he guilty? I hope you keep going!
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Thanks, knew I had to return to him…
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Definitely!
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Well Mz. D you are just going to have to write a book with all of these amazing 100 word stories. I just want to keep reading and it’s over. Great work on the #atozchallenge ❤
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He seems innocent to me, and in a lot of trouble now…
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I haven’t decided his fate yet 🙂 I’m not even sure if he’s guilty or not…
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This is awesome
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Thank you, Lynn!
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Sounds like his wife has it in for him! You’ve built up such suspense in this story.
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Thank you, might be one to expand on later.
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That would be great. 😊
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Expecting a continuation…we need that.
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Thanks, Mani, might be good for another one!
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Bummer! lol Great, Diane! Another story in the making…
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I like this one, might take it further… Thanks, Sandra!
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You’re welcome!
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Oooooh I hoping this is one you take further, that was a good cliffhanger 🙂
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Thanks, Raven. I like this one, lots of different ways it could go.
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You are doing great with your challenge. I’m so impressed.
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Wendy, thank you so much!
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Well, crap, I just saw that I was unsubscribed from your blog so I rejoined. I probably hit that button when I was trying to comment. Sorry!
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I’m glad I’m not the only one who’s done that! That’s funny.
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You are so busted, Mitchum. We’re setting up the polygraph upstairs right now. And we got a decent partial print on one of the cameras. You also forgot that the neighbors dog was barking at you when you left. Let’s see how long you keep with your story…
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I haven’t made up my mind yet if he’s guilty or not…
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Uh oh. Seems like his thoughts at least confirm he didn’t leave at 4am, but the camera? That could be a problem… not that Mitchum is definitely the one who disabled it, but not that he didn’t…
Yes, please! Give us a few more installments of this one!
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