Wary, six by six words…

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I’m not sure if this is a particular format, I just like the way the six words per line flowed…

Peering up through lowered lashes, wary
Your eyes meet mine, you wink…
Confused, I glance away, cheeks berry
Then search for hints of lies
You smile, but I see questions
Hidden within those deep dark eyes

~~~

Nervous, I bite my lower lip
I know you know I’m afraid
Feel my pulse, a racing clip
Always treasure my heart and feelings
You’ll be so careful, you plead
Whispered chance, my mind is reeling…

~~~

Photo from Pixabay

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48 responses

  1. Fantastic!

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      1. my pleasure! 🙂

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  2. You ad me at bite my lower lip. 🙂 I loved it, Dee!

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    1. Thank you, Rob, I like that visual, too!

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  3. Utterly lovely…thanks for sharing 🙂

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      1. You’re welcome!

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  4. Wow. That’s awesome. Great job.

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    1. Hey, Wendy, thanks! How are you?

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      1. I’m so happy I can’t see straight! I’m so glad to see your posts, and so happy for you to be able to do the things that make you happy!

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      2. Oh, good for both of us then!

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  5. You’re back!!!! 🎉🎉

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    1. Haha, I actually thought of something to write!

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      1. You’re soooooo good at sultry!! Can’t wait til you publish!

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      2. You are so nice! I’m getting back to writing more. Hope to continue…

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      3. You rock limericks and fiction!

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  6. Love this, sis. Hope all is well.

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    1. Omg, so good to hear from you, bro! I am great today, everything’s moving along fine. How are you and Waco?

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      1. I’ve been at her place all week. We’re both working lots but have the nights (if not evenings) together. That’s been fun.

        Tonight we’re going to go see David Sedaris. That should be fun as well.

        Glad things are moving along. Big scare, some scars, but I’m glad this didn’t defeat you.

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      2. Defeat? No way! Soon no hair, but all good blog material. And what can you do? Just keep moving forward, right? Glad you two are together! Love you, little brother ❤

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      3. I haven’t had hair in years…it’s not so bad. I can get ready to go out in 10 min.

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      4. Hahaha, good to know! Mwah! Maybe I’ll be one of the two or three women in the world who look good without hair, like those girls on Star Trek – NOT…

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      5. Vgur in Star Trek I was pretty hot. You can totally rock that look.

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  7. I agree — it flows beautifully!

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    1. Thanks, Sandra, I’m glad you liked it!

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  8. Wonderful . Loved the rhythm and the well depicted situation in the poem .

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    1. Thanks so much, I’m glad you liked it!

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  9. “you plead Whispered chance” is such an emotional word picture–nice!

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  10. You’ve found the magic of 6 x 6

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  11. I think this is brilliant. Love the (6×6)x2! Look algebra! 😜 It flows beautifully, nicely done!

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    1. Thanks, Meg! I just liked the feel of it…

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