She strolled into their bedroom after her shower, fluffy white robe tied neatly at her waist, twirling one of the sash ends lazily in a circle. Long, slim legs and feet bare, toes painted siren red. Smooth dark hair swung over one shoulder with each step she took.
He looked up from his book, startlingly blue eyes alight with interest as she bent forward to kiss him.
Book forgotten, he hooked one finger into the gaping neck of her robe, pulling her closer and closer until she could feel his warm breath by her ear.
Shivering with delight, she gasped as his cool hands slid inside her robe, unerringly finding soft, damp curves. As the robe fell away, she heard his sharp intake of breath, felt his approval as she snuggled into his embrace.
Yes, she thought with satisfaction, that flowed well. And tapping her siren red-painted fingernails on the keyboard, she proceeded to write the next page.
Flowed off the page into reality….
Love this, Diane.💜
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Hopefully, she is able to leave that keyboard and head into his embrace…
…I felt myself getting warm while reading this.
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Then my job here is done 😉
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I like
this
a
lot
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Thanks, V xo
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Ha Ha – Good one Diane.
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🙂
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Oh my, so early in the morning lol. This is great, D!!
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Early in the morning is the best, no? 😉 Thank you, D!
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You little devil lol
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Haha!
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That’s great, Diane. ☺
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Oh, this was great. You captured me with the siren red toe nails. Bravo.
Have a good one my dear.
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Thanks xoxo
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LOL ….good one 🙂
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Oh that’s fabulous! I’m half in love with all my male main characters! Now if they’d just step off the page… 😀 Anyway, love this!
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Thanks! I know, mine usually have blue eyes, my weakness, and are strong yet sensitive and always do and say the right thing…boy, not setting us up for disappointments there, huh?!
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Right?!? Even their flaws are adorable!
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In our writing, absolutely!
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Yep, in real life, meh, not so much! Mine is now researching cheap places to live in South America 😱 Apparently, you can earn enough money in 3 months in the US to last a whole year in Bolivia. (Kill me now) If I start using Spanish expressions in my posts, start worrying!
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We will come rescue you! But, of course, there is the coffee to consider 🙂
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Ain’t no amount of coffee in the world going to make me want to live in Bolivia! 😀
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Well, yeah, there’s probably drug lords and corruption too 🙂
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Yeah, not cool!
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Really. I heard from a friend who’s a Navy Seal that Belize is a good place to retire to, but…
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OOH! Now if the man was talking Belize….
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Oooh! Got me on that one!
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Oh, I’m glad…
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How did I misss this one? 😉
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Do you like?
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Very much!
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Absolutlely love this, D.
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Thanks, sis!
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My pleasure! So good.
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Sneaky…
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Yes…
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Ha! 🙂 Bet you fooled a lot of people! I hope you do write your book. You’re an excellent writer.
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Mwah! Oh, BTW, genetic counselor did not recommend testing based on longevity in my family and not much history of cancer. So that is good 🙂
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Woooooooo hoooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉
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Yep, it was kind of fascinating, too, all the strides they are making in the field…
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I need to get to a place like that. A place where Dr’s aren’t just guessing…
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I know, and yet some of it still is. I mean, I don’t have factors for major BRCA risks, there are other genes that can raise your risk but the don’t have enough info yet. I’m sure it’s like this in all areas of medicine unfortunately 😦
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I bet you’re right. We just live in a smaller community. Not on the cutting edge of medicine. But, I’ll get to a city and see what’s up one of these days. 🙂 Mine is heart. ❤️
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Well, if you decide to come to the Chicago area, you will always have a place to stay, you only have to tell me when xoxo
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Aww. Aren’t you the sweetest thing EVER?!?!?!
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Serious, anytime, dear friend. I have plenty of room for your family
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Aww. You’re so amazing. I almost cried when I read that… ❤️
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Now stop, you would do the same for me, I know!
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Yes ma’am, I would. 🙂
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The Cleveland Heart and Vascular Clinic has where you can get an online diagnosis for $700. Best of the best heart hospital. May do that. Tried to get into Mayo Clinic- they wouldn’t take me…
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Do you have to meet some criteria to go to Mayo? I guess I didn’t realize that. Cleveland sounds good, but my offer is always good for this area. Truly, it would never be a problem ❤
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You’re a sweetie. 🙂 If I end up that way ever, I’ll call you.
For Mayo, you have to apply. Up to them then whether they’ll take you.
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Huh, I didn’t know that. You’ll get checked out somewhere soon, though?
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Saving my money for a heart dr in KC that a friend recommended and loves. Also some family highly recommends Omaha NE. 🙂
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I’m so excited I almost burst out bawling!!!
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Aww, you are so sweet! Monday is mri and consult with plastic surgery, then Wednesday consult with oncologist.
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Taking care of business!!
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Yep!
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Thank you so much.
Japan time, is at 19 days am8.
Every day, home garden has screamed in the intense heat of 35 ~ 37 ℃.
Buddhist memorial service of the father of 49 days was also the end.
Best regards in the future.
I wish you good luck.
Ryoma.
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👏👏👏
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This is beautifully delicious. *Sigh*
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Oh, thank you! I’ve decided I’m just going to write my perfect guys when I need one 🙂
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That’s what I do. And so I write them every day…. 🙂
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Couldn’t sleep either?
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I was useless writing tonight because I was so tired… now I’m in bed awake. Ugh! My fiction post for tomorrow sucks… I have to rewrite it. How are you doing? ♥
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I’m tired early, fall sound asleep at 10:30, then wake up in the middle of the night and don’t get enough sleep cause tomorrow I’ll repeat the whole process. I was going to write earlier, too, and my eyes were drooping. Your fiction will be great, don’t worry! I’m good, a little on edge, but not bad 🙂
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I’ll end up drinking way too much coffee in the morning… Oh and I’ve got to take the kids to the dentist. How fun. 😐 I suppose I should close my eyes… maybe I’ll fall asleep… it’s after 3:30…! ♥ hugs! I hope you get some sleep. 🙂
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Fun day! Sleep well, I’m going to try, too!
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Nice! What a perfect picture to go along with the sensual story unfolding.
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Thanks for saying that! I had a hard time finding a picture I wanted to use — for me, the words always come first!
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You did a great job. 🙂
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Very intrigued! I hope this continues! 🙂
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Why, thank you so much!
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A beautifully evocative and detailed piece. I’m now wondering whether these two characters feature in the novel you’re planning to write. If so, you’ll probably be taking a lot of cold showers yourself. 🙂
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Haha, you know me well already!
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Wow, Diane! You had me breathless! 🙂 I didn’t post an award nomination post but I sent a shout out to you. I forget who called you Dee, but I knew it was one of your closer friends! 🙂
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Robin, I’d love it if you called me Dee. It’s been my nickname my whole life, my dad used to call me Dida and it got shortened. But lots of my friends call me Diane, too. Glad you liked the story! 🙂
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I was breathlessness also hoping for more. ❤ The writer had me holding my breath, then realized she was taking off clothes wearing a robe all in her imagination, Dee. 🙂
What I meant to say was I did not write a post accepting your lovely and kind award, but I included you as a guest featured friend (with your blog link) on my post with a white flower with bumblebee. Your V-Pub guy, Drew and someone else was there saying hi and how they loved your blog. Just was asking if you stopped by to see and sorry I won't have time to write an award post.
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I didn’t but I will, thanks. You do not need to write an award post at all!
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Super. Let us have the next page 🙂
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Thanks, Holly!
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Well now this is sizzling hot and great 😉
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Thank you! About as hot as I can go on my blog, I think!
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It was tastefully written and still hot enough.
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Thanks, Jackie!
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I loved this. It is incredibly hot and even with so few words stirred my imagination so much I “forgot” I was reading. Completely lost imagining the scene. Great work, Diane.
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Thank you, Kev. About as hot as I want to go on my blog, but it’s fun writing the scenes 😉
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Really like this one!
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Sexy and sensual … Just read your latest one and had to go back and read this first as I’d missed it. Delicious!
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[…] You can find the first part of Virtual Lover here. […]
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Oh yes that flowed so well I’m on my way to read part deux…
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Thanks, Deb, I’m just going to write my dream life 🙂
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Ooo la la and I get to be the fly on the wall…oh how fun!! Am enjoying it immensely so far….hope you never stop dreaming!! 🙂
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Thank you, Deb!
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You’re most welcome! And thank you!! hehe 😉
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Wonderful story.
Creating the perfect ‘someone’ when real life doesn’t bring one along fast enough. Ahhh, been there, but only in my mind, I’ve never put it on page. You’ve done a fantastic job of it, although I saw Part 2 before landing here at Part 1. Well done. ☺
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Reblogged this on Inner Ramblings Boulevard: and commented:
When life doesn’t bring Mr or Ms Right fast enough and all we can do is play the waiting game, sometimes we simply need to rely on our imaginations. The following post is Part 1 of a perfect example depicting such creativity. Enjoy! 🌷
Be sure to check out Part 2 here: https://ladieswholunchreviews.wordpress.com/2016/08/23/virtual-lover-cont/#like-17749
August 27 2016
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Why thank you, so nice of you to reblog!
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Aww, you’re welcome.
I’m devoting weekends to reblogging the work of or loyal followers. It’s my way of saying thank you. Without all of you there would be no ‘us’. Just a bit of reciprocity. Hugs🌷
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Xo
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Went back to the keyboard too soon😣
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🙂 I need to conjure up more time
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☺☺
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Diane, this is awesome! Funny, b/c I was going to say that I love the descriptive “siren red” when I saw it the first time … then I love how you brought it around again at the end.
Many blessings!! Debbie 🙂
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Nice heart made by the pages of the book.
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[…] can find other pages of Virtual Lover here and […]
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[…] special Valentine’s Day edition of Virtual Lover. You can find other editions at Part 1, Part 2 and Part […]
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