Wanting you…

Take my hand and let me lead you

back to what we had before…

I miss you curved around me, our bodies entwined,

warm breath and kisses against my neck,

hands gliding over skin, first slowly, then faster…

Life is too quick, too full, overflowing with musts when I need it to be filled with wants…

And what I want now is you…

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27 responses

  1. Loved the finale. The perfect way to end this piece.

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    1. Thank you, Drew. I feel like sometimes I get a thought in my head and put it out there and maybe I should wait and edit it a little — I still could, I guess. I’m too impatient sometimes and then later I look at it again and see more or how I could have done it differently…But the beginning and ending were right…

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      1. I think they were. Sometimes too much editing can kill something, too. Yours was perfect the way it was.

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      2. When are you posting again? I miss my chimp…

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      3. I am going to try to post every Monday, Wednesday, and Friday. Thanks for asking.

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      4. Thanks, I changed it a little but I like it!

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  2. This is beautiful. A perfect heart for one who appreciates all she has always been.

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      1. My pleasure! I love the words from the heart.

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  3. Softly romantic…loved the ending… 🙂

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  4. This is really amazing, Diane. The ending is so sweet. Bravo!

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    1. Oh, you are too nice, thank you. I’m having fun with this!

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  5. Very nicely put… bodies entwined is like a grapevine grows, is perfect imagery for ideal relationship, not just physically.

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    1. Oh, thank you for saying that!

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  6. Well, well, what a delicious read for a Sunday evening. My lady, this is delectable and suggestive 😉

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    1. Thank you, exactly what I was going for!

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  7. Fantasies are made of these. . . I have written something which includes the line, “Take me there” or “Whisk me off my feet.” It always helps to think of running on emotions or adrenaline, don’t you think? 😉

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    1. Yes and sometimes I get an idea and write it and then want to revise it but sometimes something quick comes out the best!

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  8. very beautiful and romantic!

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      1. you are really stepping out there and bringing us all kinds of wonderful stuff! I love the story and now poetry and romance! Keep it coming!

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      2. Thanks, I’m getting braver. I do love to write! You, too, I love your videos and your stories

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  9. Poetry, another wonderful talent that you have. Hope to read more.

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    1. So nice of you to say, thank you!

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